crazy fangirl		2009-08-16	id # 514
OMG!!! i can't believe people! this story is so cool!!! i'm a huge fan of hatori and tohru! and these other characters are cool too! but i wonder how tohru suddenly became part of the other zodiac??? deferred destiny??? like she was givena deadline to choose between freedom and the curse...? ha ha ha... i know it's a random thought! this story is cool!!! keep up the good work and don't mind the number of reviews... one time i wrote a 17 or something chapter and only received 4 reviews... it's sad... i know... and the stories been up since 2007... sigh... but who care! i look back at the story and laugh... and that's what you shouls do... keep up the good work!!!

Michiko Yumi (miku)	choco_cat22@hotmail.com	2009-10-21	id # 521
Great Story so far! Except, what Marimitsu said actually meant: I'm named very good! I am? And you? If you'd like to say, "I'm very good. How are you?" or "I'm doing good, and you?" In french, you could say, "Je suis tres bon, merci. Comment allez vous?" and the second one is, "Je fais bon et vous?" I chuckled a bit but great effort. You're an AWESOME AUTHOR. I wish to be just as creative as you one day. - Junior Writer and Fluent French Speaker, Michiko Yumi

lirien		2010-08-25	id # 579
omg your writings are absolutely amazing :3 more please ^////^ love lirien